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I Knew It Was Over

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I knew it was over when he looked up and I saw his eyes. Once so green now golden and filled with hate. Time slowed and all I could do was watch as his body filled with darkness and he was lost to me for ever. I dropped my weapon. It landed with a 'clang' as it hit the ground. Nothing matter any more, I had lost the feeling in my hands and my mind went num. I didn't want to fight any more. I had lost so many friends in this pointless war and now the only thing I had left was gone too. He slowly stood we locked eyes as he took a step closer to me he swung his blade and knocked down everything in his path as he made his way slowly towards me, his eyes still locked on to mien. I slowly picked up my blade and took my place agesnt him, we had done this hundreds of time before. However I was never scared until now. I never thought it would end like this. We were about 2 meeter's a way now. A tear rolled down my cheek and I looked in to his eyes because maybe just maybe there was something left. But it was hopeless and I knew that it would be the finale fall.....
This is something I started on twitter (@Mollyther) I no its a weird place to right a story but there you are :) Its short I no but I like it. Its not made for any one so you can read it for who you like :) and you can make up how they got too that point. So enjoy :D
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kyriesin's avatar
Interesting, especially since you've specified no characters. I have to say, this can be taken in many ways from how one feels at a time or to describe struggle against something in life. :)
Sorry, I have tendency to analyze writings. ^^;